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Quick doodle, so crappy quality. I had redesigned Pyre, and I wanted to redesign Raine too since she looked too much like Nenoko. This is still really tentative, mainly for her outfit. I wanted a clean, sophisticated outfit and originally was going to do a vest with a dress shirt under, but then I felt weird since that's what Truck has.

Her neck area also feels plain. I avoided putting a tie there because then I started getting a Medic-tan feel, and open cleavage feels kinda obvious.

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:iconforthesakeofit:
Made a mistake, meant to say the thighs were drawn big, but not the hips.
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:iconyuchiyo-sanaki:
I really like her hair. The bun is sorely under-done.
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*Matsu-sensei Sep 6, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm still debating if I should go with a low bun or high bun.
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:iconyuchiyo-sanaki:
I like the low bun, personally.
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:iconplatypie8:
Er... sorry, but the breasts are kinda scary.
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:iconmatsu-sensei:
*Matsu-sensei Sep 6, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That's too bad. :)
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:icontadapockyman:
Perhaps you can try adding a birthmark to her neck?
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:iconn0tsteve:
i liked the old design better, actually.
eh, oh well. this one's good too.

but i think you were on to something with the tie in the upper left of the page.
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*Matsu-sensei Sep 6, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah, but made her feel too much like [link]
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:iconn0tsteve:
Oh. Then i dont know what to add to the neck. Open cleavagemakes her look too much like the heavy. I dont think you really need to change the neck. It looks pretty good as is.
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