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"I love you," Mattie said. She paused, almost tasting the words in her mouth, mulling them over.

"… I love you," she repeated, but in a deeper, velvety voice this time. There was silence again as she let it echo in her mind. After a few seconds, she groaned and buried her face in her arms, folded together on top of the desk at which she was sitting.

"It doesn't sound right," she complained aloud to no one in particular, even though there was no one there anyway.

"I think it sounds wonderful when you say it in that second voice," said Matt, standing right behind her. "I accept your feelings for me, my dear. Let us elope, post haste!"

Mattie sat up abruptly, a bright flush covering her face. Apparently someone was there.

"Not you, Matt!" she shouted, flustered. "This is for my story!"

Her long brown hair whirled as she turned to face him. She was still in her pajamas due to today being her day off. The two soft mountains of her large breasts swung with their owner, settled, and appeared to form a second pair of accusing eyes. Matt reached for her actual set of eyes, and plucked the fake slim glasses off the bridge of her nose.

"Your story doesn't need fake glasses to make it better," he scolded her, shaking his finger at her lightly. Mattie hung her head in shame, feeling helpless without the glasses to hide behind.

"But they make me feel smarter. I feel sophisticated with them on," she pouted. "Glasses give off the vibe that I've ruined my eyes from countless hours of musing over small, cramped handwriting." With this, she raised her head and clasped her hands together, eyes sparkling. Matt groaned and turned his back on her, putting the glasses in his pocket.

"You don't need made-up experience to give off the impression that you're a good writer," he commented. "The reader won't see you anyway." It was his day off too, but he was dressed to head out; he even had his shoes on. The only thing missing was his iconic blue jacket, but it was hot outside so he didn't need it anyway. He turned around to look at Mattie again. "Now c'mon: put some clothes on so we can go somewhere," he said with a smile.

"All right, all right… Aren't you supposed to be the lazy one while I'm the one who gets on your case?" grunted Mattie as she stretched her arms out behind her head.

"Usually, yeah," Matt answered, still standing in her room.

"… Err, you going to get out so I can change?"

"I would, but I figured you'd need some help getting that bra on," he said, grinning. "Or off. Whichever order it is."

Mattie shook her head and laughed. "All right, fine. Make yourself useful and hand me my blouse over there on the bureau, will you?" she said, pointing at the drawers behind him and taking her shirt off.

"Eh? I don't see one?" Matt remarked turning away to look where Mattie told him. He started to turn back toward her. "Are you s-"

Suddenly, he couldn't see anything as Mattie threw her shirt over his face, then kicked him out of her room.

"Yeah, uh, helping me change clothes? Not going to happen," she said, and closed the door.
Got bored in English and was feeling an urge to bring back Matt and Mattie, as well as work on fleshing out my stories more.

Wanted to try and emphasize Matt and Mattie's relationship while making it amusing. Durrhurr: it ended up feeling like something from Love Hina.

To those who don't know and are confused by the title, Mattie is Matt's anima/feminine side, but they tell people that they're siblings.
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Quest11 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2010
Great story, love how Matt calls her "My dear" very funny.

Keep up the shveet writing.
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Matsu-sensei Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Elope~
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leviadragon99 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2010
Ahhh, I follow.
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hewhowalksdeath Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2010
like Love Hina? mor like "almost like Love Hina" it got Keitaro and Naru written all over here, mate! XD

sweet, very funny and somewhat a breathe of fresh air. nice little moment!
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Matsu-sensei Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ha, Naru maybe, but Keitaro's not that bold.
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hewhowalksdeath Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2010
hmm...true, true, he's always been the type of guy that's kinda... ...awkward. (lucky guy, though...)
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C-J-Cactus Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2010
needed a car chase, but other then that was good
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TripcodeMel Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2010
INCEST IS THE BEST
PUT YOUR BROTHER TO THE TEST
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TheWillfulWanderer Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nice little snippet of writing.

Tho'... if Mattie's Matt's femside, then isn't that whole idea kinda overboard? On either side? I'unno, that always struck me like, I'unno, ogling a sibling. Or some form of masturbation. Something.

The price persona-writers pay, as multiple personality practicioners....
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Matsu-sensei Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I already did a masturbation joke on the idea a long time ago.
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TheWillfulWanderer Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah, I seemed to remember such. Wasn't sure tho'.

Srsly, tho', I'm not sure I can parse that right in my head, body... uh.... shyness? Embarrassment? Privacy? Something.

But, from yourself. Even if it is an alternate. Really can't imagine I'd have that issue... or is it an issue? Maybe it's just a healthy sense of personal space?

Gaaaah, so many questions....
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Matsu-sensei Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
...?
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TheWillfulWanderer Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah, something like that.
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Jcdr Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2010   Digital Artist
Nice story, easy to read and well narrated, gives a bit more depth about your characters :D
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Matsu-sensei Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:)
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YokoSC Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
that was really cute
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Matsu-sensei Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Mission accomplished.
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king-of-daimonds Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2010
the "second pair of eyes" bit got me laughing
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Matsu-sensei Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Me too, lol.
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Tragic-Daddy Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2010
Far as I'm concerned, Love Hina was and is one of the best romantic comedy manga out there. It says something that it's surpassed its predecessors to become the definitive harem manga (at least in the states).

Anywho, nice script. I don't usually read these, but yours has a nice flow to it; I could see it playing out as a comic.
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Matsu-sensei Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I really like it, but when I look back at it with experienced eyes, there were parts that dragged on a bit too long, some expressions got overused, etc. But I still enjoy it.
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CrazedPotato Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2010
"Durrhurr: it ended up feeling like something from Love Hina."

I was going to say something, but you beat me to it. If it was on purpose, nice. If it was coincidental, durrhurrhurr.
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Matsu-sensei Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
A bit of both. :P
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IvanOfSiberia Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2010
Good story, you're doing well with these.
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:iconmatsu-sensei:
Matsu-sensei Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I used to write a lot before I got into drawing. :P
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IvanOfSiberia Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2010
I usually try to start something, but I always don't get far or finish them.. >.<
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Zionzap Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2010  Student Artist
Nice story. Brings out your characters well.
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Matsu-sensei Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's helpful when I want to flesh some aspects out, but feel too lazy to make a comic. Plus, I can go more in depth with their thoughts or feelings.
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ZeroBlueX7 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2010
ROFLMAO Awesome, I wouldn't mind reading more of these XD
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Matsu-sensei Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I might take a stab at others using my other OCs to flesh them out.
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ZeroBlueX7 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2010
Lookin forward to it XD *Thinking of Pyre or Claire though I don't expect it* lol
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Matsu-sensei Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'll actually do Claire and Nenoko, though I need to tinker things since I'm getting rid of Matsu.
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ZeroBlueX7 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2010
0__0 why gettin rid of Matt??
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Matsu-sensei Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Matt is staying, but Matsu is gone. It's because Matsu was sorta Matt, but he's served his purpose. I already have two "Matts" (Matt and Mattie), so I don't want to turn it into a big self-insert fest.
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ZeroBlueX7 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2010
Oh ok I always figured Matt and Matsu were the same person. Kinda like superman and clark kent lol
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Matsu-sensei Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lol. :iconorzplz: This is what happens when I try to quickly rename the characters for an English assignment then back again before I have to go to class.
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vladplasmes Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2010   General Artist
interesting story.

i thought matt was gonna see the buxom (possible lack for a better term) mattie without a shirt on. lol.
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Matsu-sensei Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
He already has before, lol.
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vladplasmes Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2010   General Artist
lol
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Matsu-sensei Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Fix'd.
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somahiru Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2010  Student General Artist
:P I liked this little story (and is more awesome when you Imagine the story while reading it)

And I didnīt knew that about Mattie, thatīs a very cool idea :D
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Matsu-sensei Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah, I want to make comics of these things, but find that little details or thoughts/feelings can get lost in images.
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somahiru Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2010  Student General Artist
Is curious that... Images can do better than words in some aspect, and viceversa, and you will post more of this?

and the flow was so nice, not jumpy neither slowy
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sweet-pea-soup Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2010  Student Digital Artist
where's the porn?
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SSj5Bob Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2010
Probably with the beef.
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sweet-pea-soup Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2010  Student Digital Artist
beefstick
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Matsu-sensei Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That's what I'd like to know.
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