I like the oringinal. Giving GK more definition/detail on the edited version was nice, but he wound up looking like a lump of coal... which could be intentional, I realize, but just isn't to my tastes.
The original looks like a Heartless, the bottom looks like some kind of rock creature. Not saying either is bad, just take that into consideration maybe?
Devious Comments
You do know what graphite is, right?
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